
This week, Baltimore Fishbowl earned a thoughtful comment with our highest word count to date! โDad Shows Teen Whoโs Boss, Shoots Laptop,โ a post by the editors, describing Texan Tommy Jordanโs shoot-em-up destruction of his spoiled daughterโs computer, inspired David Harriss to reply with a short article of sorts, including these winning lines: โTommy Jordan is like any other hard working American out there. He works hard to provide for his family. Yet, like many other teens (including most of us at that age), his daughter Hannah doesnโt appreciate (or understand), the lesson he is trying to teach his daughter. Her main focus of her rant on her FaceBook page was about doing chores. We start teaching children about the โRealโ world when they are young. We teach them to obey police officers, to follow the walk/donโt walk signs, to respect others, and to try to mold them into productive members of civilized society. However, in todayโs society, the lessons of our grandparents and great grandparents are no longer taught. We donโt teach our children to say yes sir, no sir, yes maโam, no maโam, please, thank you, youโre welcome and excuse me.โ To snag more wisdom from David H., visit the story!
Meanwhile this week, publisher and editor Susan Dunn weighed in on George Huguelyโs murder trial. Her somber post, โA Toxic Relationship between Love and Huguely,โ received this quiet comment from Pigtown Design, โCannot even imagine what Sharon and Lexie are going through right now. Theyโre in my thoughts and prayers.โ
On a brighter note, Baltimore fiction writer Jane Deluryโs My Real Life Modern Family essay, โConsigning the Past,โ in which she reflects on her great-grandparentsโ travel trunks and the memories she stores because of them, received plenty of fan mail โ each comment appreciative of Janeโs writing style and her subtle content.
โโThe ocean that had heaved under Annaโs and Albertโs berths and rattled the hatchways, was flat and innocuous 35,000 feet below our plane.โ I love that. Beautiful essay,โ Elisabeth said.
โโI wish I could say I looked back.โ Lovely, lovely, lovely!โ wrote Chris.
โWell done. The drive to shed is complicated; for better or worse, our past is told in accumulation of details and wonderful debris. Thanks for this,โ said โPMETSOP.โ
โSo well writtenโฆthe type of writing that reads so fast, that you want to re-read again and again,โ noted Mary Lynne.
Marion said, โOy, the writing. Gorgeous and mesmerizing.โ
Perhaps our favorite reply of all came from Janeโs own sibling. โGorgeous Jane,โ wrote John. โAs Janeโs brother I can testify itโs not only lyrical, but true. If I could write like my sis, Iโd pen an essay on the two trunks I got from the Irish side of our ancestry (and no Korean consignment shop will get them after reading this, to be sure).โ
In response to Associate Editor Rachel Monroeโs post, โLocal Student on College Jeopardy!โ Jon Palestra thoroughly updated Rachel with news that Goucher senior Sarah Bartโs victorious College Jeopardy! participation is ongoing.
โI think you will see Sarah in the semi-finals,โ wrote Jon P. in closing. โThat rules!โ replied Rachel. โSo glad to hear it! Last I saw, she was in 2nd place in the wild card standingsโฆletโs all keep our fingers crossed!โ Added Jon P. on Thursday: โRachel, Sarah is competing in the Jeopardy semi-finals tonight. Check it out.โ
Thanks, Jon! Thank you, readers! Write soon!
